Sophie, i really like your drafts your cover, contents page and double page spread all really look like they are from the same magazine and everything looks like its been really thought through and organized perfectly. Your contents page i feel needs to show more pages in your magazine i also think your models don't suit your band and magazine genre, they don't look the part. But besides that your contents page lay out is good, simply but organised professionally. i hope this has been helpful.
Sophie, i really like your drafts your cover, contents page and double page spread all really look like they are from the same magazine and everything looks like its been really thought through and organized perfectly. Your contents page i feel needs to show more pages in your magazine i also think your models don't suit your band and magazine genre, they don't look the part. But besides that your contents page lay out is good, simply but organised professionally. i hope this has been helpful.
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