i have looked at the feedback given from my teacher, and looked at the comments I could use to improve my work, this is what I have looked at improving so far, I have changed the image on the front page and the text so its starting to look like a real magazine. also I have made the bar-code bigger and changed the layout of my magazine name. I will change it again as the title looks like there is too much writing so I will reduce it down so its just plain. Also I will change the writing in the bottom left hand corner as on real magazines we see in the shops it shows band names so i will adjust it so it becomes more sell-able for shops. Finally the issue date and price will be central to the bar code and smaller fonts.

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